This blog is designed to be an opportunity for my students to practice academic writing. Read the questions carefully. Before you "publish", make sure you have all capital letters, you have checked the spelling, you have make your subject and verb agree, and you have used the correct verb tense.
"The Jewels"
Thursday, June 7, 2012
Fainting on the Street
Why does Monsieur Lantin faint on the street? (Student ID)
903165- Monsieur Latin fainted because finally he realized he's been bamboozled. He's been thinking that his wife had been faithful with him. He's thought that his wife had been going to the theater but she might have been going to see the other guy.
Lantin couldn't believe what was happening in that day.He thought that the jeweler was wrong about jeweler's offer. But he noticed that the gem was sent to Lantin's house. So after that lantin started thinking that she has been cheating on him.That's why Lantin fainted because lantin couldn't handle what was in his mind.965443
Monsieur Lantin fainted down because he had an internal conflict. He was thinking in what way his wife got all the real jewels she had. When Monsieur Lantin realize what his wife had done he could not handle and fainted. 984048
Munsieur Lantin couldn't believe that his wife had lied to him and probably cheated on him .He fainted from shock because all the time he thought that the jewelry that he's wife had was fake ,He also realized that she had lied to him all the time ,He fainted because he felt like a compleat fool .987601
He was exhausted by all the knowledge he had received in that day and the day. He came to realize that his wife was cheating on him and that was how she got all the jewelry. 964951
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ReplyDeleteMonsieur Latin fainted because finally he realized he's been bamboozled. He's been thinking that his wife had been faithful with him. He's thought that his wife had been going to the theater but she might have been going to see the other guy.
Lantin couldn't believe what was happening in that day.He thought that the jeweler was wrong about jeweler's offer. But he noticed that the gem was sent to Lantin's house. So after that lantin started thinking that she has been cheating on him.That's why Lantin fainted because lantin couldn't handle what was in his mind.965443
ReplyDeleteMonsieur Lantin fainted down because he had an internal conflict. He was thinking in what way his wife got all the real jewels she had. When Monsieur Lantin realize what his wife had done he could not handle and fainted.
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Munsieur Lantin couldn't believe that his wife had lied to him and probably cheated on him .He fainted from shock because all the time he thought that the jewelry that he's wife had was fake ,He also realized that she had lied to him all the time ,He fainted because he felt like a compleat fool .987601
ReplyDeleteHe was exhausted by all the knowledge he had received in that day and the day. He came to realize that his wife was cheating on him and that was how she got all the jewelry. 964951
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