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"The Jewels"
Thursday, June 7, 2012
A Happy Marriage
The story says, "He was incredibly happy with her." Explain why. (Student ID)
Mr. Lantin was incredibly happy because he got married with a wonderful woman. Who had a very charming personality, and it was why Mr. Lantin was falling in love more and more in opposite to real life love after a couple years start decrising ,but for Mr. Lantin and his wife everything was so wonderful. 987923
Latin was so happy because he married to a virtuous woman, who had good attention for him. After married he was loving her more and more. By the time everything she do made him love her more. However, he was so happy with all her fake personality that he never seem what was her doing. 964876
Of course he was happy becase he thought the he had married a wonderful woman. Even though madame had her secret, she prentended not show her husband what she was doing out there.The days were passing and his love increased everyday. Madame flashy attetion made Lantin comfortable with her. Madame always took care of lantin. She did everything to make the man happier of the world and she did.965443
He was happy with her because she completely disguised herself as a wonderful and loving woman. She did all the things that were expected of a good wife. He thought she was good at financing the money he brought home and she bought nice things for the house and fancy wines but she was using the money she was getting from other men. 964951
He was happy because she was very beautiful and she was keeping the house clean and she was saving money. And he was really in love with her. After she died, he cried a lot because madame was the perfect wife for him. 983947
He was very happy with her because she was nice and always took good care of him,she also comprehend his feelings and she was always in a good mood ,she was lovely and very charm .All these characteristics made him incredible happy with her and love her even more every single day.987601
Mr. Lantin was incredibly happy because he got married with a wonderful woman. Who had a very charming personality, and it was why Mr. Lantin was falling in love more and more in opposite to real life love after a couple years start decrising ,but for Mr. Lantin and his wife everything was so wonderful. 987923
ReplyDeleteLatin was so happy because he married to a virtuous woman, who had good attention for him. After married he was loving her more and more. By the time everything she do made him love her more. However, he was so happy with all her fake personality that he never seem what was her doing. 964876
ReplyDeleteOf course he was happy becase he thought the he had married a wonderful woman. Even though madame had her secret, she prentended not show her husband what she was doing out there.The days were passing and his love increased everyday. Madame flashy attetion made Lantin comfortable with her. Madame always took care of lantin. She did everything to make the man happier of the world and she did.965443
ReplyDeleteHe was happy with her because she completely disguised herself as a wonderful and loving woman. She did all the things that were expected of a good wife. He thought she was good at financing the money he brought home and she bought nice things for the house and fancy wines but she was using the money she was getting from other men. 964951
ReplyDeleteHe was happy because she was very beautiful and she was keeping the house clean and she was saving money. And he was really in love with her. After she died, he cried a lot because madame was the perfect wife for him. 983947
ReplyDeleteHe was very happy with her because she was nice and always took good care of him,she also comprehend his feelings and she was always in a good mood ,she was lovely and very charm .All these characteristics made him incredible happy with her and love her even more every single day.987601
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